There is a lot I want to comment about, firstly, the idea is definately not well thought of. Something more complex would be nicer.

Next you have already have main idea of drawing, just that I know your using a computer mouse to draw. It feels kind of akward drawing like that. Try find a digital drawing tablet, it simulates pen movements smoothly.

Lastly, try to voice act in a more quieter area, I can hear voices in the background.

I think you have potential though, a lot of potential actually.
Hope you luck in the future.

Here is what my fates : I am toejam megatron, the strongest preist and my destiny is to f**k the thoughts of Soviet Russia.

I took another one just to change the one I had ( But it was still no good! )

You are Jim Oak, The Savage Hero.
Your destiny is to taste the flesh of Pokemon.

I am such a gross person...

Nice gaming. Background is about slightly above average.
Music, cool.
Although, more effort needed.

Im sooo AMPD!

Coolest game ever. I like the songs.

cool, it sounds like a theme for a snow song. It is a good work.

Wow, Dimrain47, that was a pretty good song you made. It was an amazing song.

awesome!