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[Get Jacked]

There is a lot I want to comment about, firstly, the idea is definately not well thought of. Something more complex would be nicer.

Next you have already have main idea of drawing, just that I know your using a computer mouse to draw. It feels kind of akward drawing like that. Try find a digital drawing tablet, it simulates pen movements smoothly.

Lastly, try to voice act in a more quieter area, I can hear voices in the background.

I think you have potential though, a lot of potential actually.
Hope you luck in the future.

JBOMBCOM responds:

that was a older animation so i used the mouse but i already have a tablet. right now though im using the family computer and i will get a laptop soon thx for giving me some tips

[The Noob Adventures Episode 6]

Great!Fart and NOObly where saved by YoDa.